03.30.08

Baby Dies–Other Children Taken By CPS

Posted in articles, generic post tagged , , , , , , at 1:17 pm by Elizabeth Melton Parsons

Mr. and Mrs. Smith loved their three children and were completely devastated when their youngest died of SIDS (sudden infant death syndrome). More heartache lay in store when several months later a caseworker from child welfare appeared at their door.

Telling the couple she’d been informed they might need help, she gained entrance and immediately asked if they had food in the house. Not understanding what exactly the woman was doing there, they complied with her request to see inside their well-stocked refrigerator and cupboards. The caseworker then asked to see their other children. Again the couple complied. Although the children were well cared for and appeared happy, things went downhill from there.

The caseworker began interrogating them on the death of their baby and accusing them of causing the infant’s death. Mrs. Smith, having never recovered from the loss, became hysterical and Mr. Smith lost his temper. After asking the woman several times to leave their home, he then threatened bodily harm if she didn’t immediately leave. She left, but returned the next day with a local police officer and forcibly removed the children from their home.

The papers she left with the couple stated the children were being removed because of the father’s uncontrolled violence and the suspicious death of their infant child.

The couple gathered medical documents and doctor statements verifying the health and cause of death of their child. With these documents, as well as testimony from friends, family members, and neighbors, Mr. and Mrs. Smith went to court with full confidence they’d be exonerated and bring their children home. They found this was to be but one of many long drawn out court battles.

The case was finally resolved when the caseworker involved was proved to have made many false statements on documents submitted to the court. After a year apart the family was finally reunited, but not before losing their home and jobs because of the financial burden, having to appear in court so often and comply with a long list of demands from social services. After regaining custody of their children, they left the state to stay with relatives and try to rebuild the lives destroyed by one over zealous caseworker.

What I don’t understand about the case above is…why wasn’t the caseworker involved fired and why wasn’t she held legally accountable for submitting false statements in a court of law? I was told it was because the papers submitted by the caseworker weren’t legal documents or some such BS. I guess my small brain just doesn’t understand the legal system. I do know that if I lie in court, I’ll be charged with perjury.

Read my other post: Children Kidnapped by CPS: http://elizabethmeltonparsons.wordpress.com/2008/02/20/children-kidnapped-by-cps/

Elizabeth
http://egparsons.com

03.29.08

Response to Comment: How To Write A Great Query Letter

Posted in New Novels, Novel Writing, articles, generic post, writing resources tagged , , , , , , at 1:41 pm by Elizabeth Melton Parsons

Thank you Malcolm. I appreciate your comment and the lead to Noah Lukeman’s free e-book, “How To Write A Great Query Letter”. I’ve downloaded and read it–an excellent resource, especially for those new to writing query letters and those of us who have been writing them for years.

A lot of the things he states are obvious and all writers should already know these things, if you don’t…you’d better learn them and quick. I only found one thing in his book that I didn’t know, and that one thing was worth the read. I’ve spent years researching query letter writing and have asked for and received many sample query letters from major publishers on what they want in one. Yet, I’ve never seen or had any mention of this one simple thing from anyone. And I can’t even begin to tell you how annoying that is. So, listen up, people…get this book and read it. It doesn’t cost anything, but a little time. Go to Amazon and download it. It could save you a lot of frustration.

I will admit I was somewhat surprised that this wonderful resource backed up one of the points I made in my previous post about being rejected on the basis of author credentials. It’s infrequent I see this much honesty on that subject.

I do think you misunderstood me, Malcolm. I still do send many queries. I just won’t query the major publishers because of their ridiculous waiting time and wanting exclusive submissions. This brings me to another thing I liked about Mr. Lukeman’s book, his position on playing the ‘waiting game’. I’ve already been doing this with the smaller presses and see no reason why I shouldn’t implement it with all my queries in future, whether to agents or small/large publishers.

Thanks again, Malcolm. Mr. Lukeman’s free book is indeed a great resource. And a big thank you to Mr. Lukeman for offering such a valuable resource free to all.

Elizabeth

http://egparsons.com

03.27.08

Arrogant BS From Established Writers

Posted in New Novels, Novel Writing, articles, generic post tagged , , , , , , , , , , , at 1:51 pm by Elizabeth Melton Parsons

Ever read blogs and website commentary from established writers? I do, but there are days when I wish I didn’t. It never fails to astound me at how arrogant and condescending some of these popular writers can be. Now before I continue, let me say that for the most part, the well-established authors out there are kind and helpful to aspiring writers. Unfortunately, we have those on the other side who, for whatever reason, choose to give bad advice. Even worse, they seem determined to squash the dreams of new and unpublished writers. Shame on you, you too were once a struggling newbie.

I cringe every time I read these phrases, ‘Do not do online publishing/ebooks. This does not make you a published author. If you cannot get into print with a commercial publisher, you are not good enough.’

After the above statements, they will then go on to give you the statistics showing just how difficult it is to get published by these commercial publishers, as if most aspiring authors don’t already know how difficult it is. The phrase ‘you are not good enough’ is the one that annoys me the most. This may be true in some cases or even in many cases. Sometimes your manuscript may not be good enough. Although, judging by some of the atrocious crap being published by these large publishers, I can’t even imagine what could be ‘not good enough’.

Don’t listen to this BS. If your dream is to be published by a large commercial publisher, don’t query on your first draft. Rewrite, edit, have it critiqued, rewrite/edit again–then make a list of all of the reputable agents out there who represent the genre your manuscript fits in and query all of them. The reason for trying to get an agent is simple. Most large publishers only deal with agents—not writers. If every reputable agent out there rejects you, try querying the publisher directly if they accept such queries. If you are rejected by all of them, rewrite your manuscript and have it professionally critiqued and edited, then try again. You may need to write a new and better story and begin the process all over again. Or you can begin to query the smaller presses and yes, (yikes!) even the e-book publishers. Your choice—your decision. Just don’t let anyone who hasn’t read your story tell you that you are not good enough. How would they know if they’ve never read it? And don’t be discouraged by the form rejection letters you will undoubtedly receive. After all, most of these editors have never read your manuscript either. Most rejections are sent after receiving a query letter. Sounds frustrating, doesn’t it? Well, no one ever said building a writing career was a like a day at the beach.

I know exactly how frustrating it is. Although I have been a professional writer for years, having had articles, stories, and poetry published in newspapers, magazines and textbooks, I am a new aspiring novelist. It would be impossible for me to be published by a large commercial publisher of fiction. I don’t query them. I have queried exactly three major publishers of romance. One sent a form rejection letter in reply to a simple query letter. It wasn’t right for their editorial department. How did they know, they hadn’t read one single word of it? They knew because I had not been previously published in full-length fiction. That’s all that mattered to them. Another asked for the first three chapters and a synopsis. They sent a very nice letter telling me what a fine writer I am and how much they enjoyed the beginning of my story, but they had no line in the sub-genre my story was in. Kudos to that editor for explaining why I was being rejected. A class act, if ever there was one. The last publisher asked for my entire manuscript and kept it for almost a year before rejecting it. I wouldn’t have minded that except they said they’d get back to me within ninety days and they were looking at it on an exclusive basis, which means I couldn’t query anyone else at the same time as they had it. Another pet peeve of mine: No simultaneous submissions. Hum bug. I have a life too. I wrote a post on this once before and I will post it here later.

I made a decision to not query them anymore. That was my choice, you must make your own. I also made the decision to not buy their books. I was so sorely disappointed in the last few I read that now I search the net for small press print and e-books written by new exciting writers. I have been very pleasantly surprised at the tremendous talent out there.

Keep writing and good luck!

Elizabeth Melton Parsons

http://egparsons.com

03.07.08

Robins in the Snow

Posted in articles, generic post tagged , , , , , , , , at 1:43 pm by Elizabeth Melton Parsons

Every morning, as I sit here checking e-mails, I watch out the window for the first sign of spring–Robins. When those little guys appear, I know spring is close behind. So imagine my delight when I looked out a couple of days ago and there they were. They were hopping all over the yard with their lovely rust colored breasts puffed out proudly. It was a balmy 70 degrees. Spring had arrived for sure. Now I sit here watching the snow beginning to fall–a huge winter storm moving in, closing schools and making travel extremely hazardous. It reminded me of a post I put on my other blog a long time ago. Weather patterns in Southern Indiana are erratic, but this winter/spring scenario does often repeat itself. Since my older post is so appropriate to what is happening now, I’m putting it here:

My Mom always watched for Robins to come home after the harsh realities of winter had began to fade. She said Robins were the first sign that spring was surely on it’s way. While having my coffee the other morning, I sat looking out the large windows in my dining room and the yard was full of Robins. It was about 20 degrees and snowing a little. But those little birds, so busy pecking at the ground with their lovely red breasts, warmed my heart and gave me hope that yes indeed, spring was coming.

A few days later the sun was shining and the air had warmed. I saw Blue birds…not Blue Jays. Those beautiful little birds with their bright blue feathers and rusty red breasts. They were flitting here and there around the yard. The males were scuffing with each other over the attentions of one lovely little female who sat and watched…totally unconcerned. For she knew the best would win.

I noticed flowers were beginning to pop their noses out of the still half frozen earth and squirrels were bouncing from tree to tree. Spring! A time of warmth and renewal. The awakening of nature from its long winter’s nap. ‘Hope springs eternal’ and how could hope not spring forth from within us when such sights present themselves at winter’s end and spring’s arrival?

Of course today it is back to cold with a few lingering snow flurries, but I’m not worried. I know it is only winter’s last hurrah. The birds have told me so and they are never wrong.

Elizabeth

http://egparsons.com

03.03.08

St. Patrick’s Day Contest ~ Win $100 Worth of Books

Posted in Uncategorized tagged , , , , , at 2:45 am by Elizabeth Melton Parsons

Here’s a fantastic contest for all you avid readers out there. The Long and Short of It romance review site is having a St. Paddy’s Day Contest. $100 worth of books. You even get to choose the books. Now what could be better than that?

One Grand Prize:

*All Romance Ebooks donated – One Free Download

*Black Lyon Ebooks donated – One Free Download

 *Linden Bay Romance donated – One Free Download

*Tease Publishing donated – $10 worth of free books

*The Wild Rose Press donated – Two (2) $5 Gift Certificates

*Writer’s Exchange donated – $10 Gift Certificate

*The Long and the Short of It donated – a $10 Gift Certificate from Amazon.

Two Second Place Prizes:

Donated by The Long and the Short of It:

$5 Gift Certificate from Amazon.com

$5 Gift Certificate from Samhain Publishing

$5 Gift Certificate from Fictionwise

Check it out here:

http://longandshortreviews.com/luck.htm

Good Luck….

Elizabeth

http://egparsons.com